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    A different autumn scene no.2

    Here is another shot taken the same day. Then again, I am not fully comfortable with it yet I get the impression that it is somewhat more succesful than my previous tree shot.

    comments/analysis are welcome!!

    Seb
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    Re: A different autumn scene no.2

    This one is definately better in my opinion. Having the grass in the foreground just helps this picture sooo much and the colors are just perfect! The grass adds the depth which I believe was lacking in your other pic.

    Good shot,

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    Re: A different autumn scene no.2

    I think this one is pretty good. The only thing is the focus, I wish if there were things out of focus and others in focus. The two tree trunks & the grass in the foreground are great. Nice work.

    Edit: oops the background is out of focus isn't it? I guess it just looks too strong it over powers the trunks.
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    Re: A different autumn scene no.2

    Nice shot , Seb. The composition is stronger than the other, but I would not necessarily say it is better. This is very good, but I also thought the other was good as well for all its colors and textures. Definetely held my interest. This is a much more simpler shot, and I like the detail and the placement of the trunks. Good work, Seb
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    Re: A different autumn scene no.2

    Hey guys,

    Thanks for the vote of confidence

    I don't do a lot of nature shots like that but I intend to do some more next year.

    Leels: yes, the background is out of focus.

    Seb

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