Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
The first pic I think I would have wanted to see some more of what is there in the upper right corner of the frame. The second shot is nicely framed.
The third one I think you should have stood back some more so we could get more an idea what were looking at. Hard to make it out and the tones and contrast too flat.
The last one is the best /i feel. Framed and composed very well and has depth and contrast.
Other than that, the images suffer only from a somewhat poor scan quality and am sure the originals look much better..
thanks for the comments. i never thought about the 3rd one being vague since im familiar with the building, but you're right. i just thought the RIP was eerily appropriate.