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    I Climb Rocks
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    A deep look of stricken eyes

    This is my niece Makayla and i thought i caught the emotion in her at the perfect time, i love this picture. incase your wondering the stuff on her face by har shirt is water. but hey im open to any comments. This is the first post i have done since July so im gald to be back

    Devin

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    Re: A deep look of stricken eyes

    That certainly is an interesting expression on her face. To me she looks like she just got caught in the act of doing something that she isn’t supposed to be doing. I like the tonality of this image and the DOF is nice in that you case see the fountain but the real focus of the image is on the girl. I would have maybe tried a slightly different angle so the RV’s aren’t visible in the background and the composition wouldn’t be quite as centered.

    Greg

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    I Climb Rocks
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    Re: A deep look of stricken eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by dadas115
    That certainly is an interesting expression on her face. To me she looks like she just got caught in the act of doing something that she isn’t supposed to be doing. I like the tonality of this image and the DOF is nice in that you case see the fountain but the real focus of the image is on the girl. I would have maybe tried a slightly different angle so the RV’s aren’t visible in the background and the composition wouldn’t be quite as centered.

    Greg
    thanks for the tip, but i had no choice about the RV's it was a wierd park that was below everything else. But thanks i appreciate anything i can get.

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    Re: A deep look of stricken eyes

    Could you maybe have used a wider aperture or longer FL? I know these things can be really tough to say the least. You really got a nice expression there, maybe a little cropping and possibly some selective blurring might solve the RV problem (not that it is a big deal).

    Greg

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