Greg, that is a fine subject and I feel you have framed it very well. I just do not think the lighting here at night is flattering the subject too well. The lighting shining onto the ground and the stone foundations/supports is too bright and ruining the mood that i think there should be here. Maybe a shot from another angle to avoid those lights?
It's a good subject and I think you should keep at this at diffeeent angles and times of day , if you can.