Couples

[Don Schaeffer]

[Frog]

Not enough to the first one, Don, but I like the second.
I think you should try to darken the highlights and the washed out areas might get more detail.

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Frog. Which highlights? In the black and white?

[jetrim]

I agree, the white coat is EXTRA white, either darken a touch or just go over the coat and baseball cap with a burn brush at very low opacity (5-10%) and the second shot is a keeper.

[Frog]

Yes, the b/w, Don.

[Don Schaeffer]

Thanks Frog and Jetrim