COOL and BREEZY

[JULIAN]

2nd photo submitted... I hope this displays accurately..... any comments?

[iJoe]

very nice, it is very cool and breezy indeed. i would suggest some moisture on the lips though, it may make her pop a little more

[GB1]

I agree with iJoe that her lips need a little more zip. The eyes and lighting are excellant. I also like the way you used the DOF and the overall composition of the photo. Good job!

GB

[DJM]

What a truly great shot! The only thing I see wrong is her left eye, as we are looking at her, has some disturbing shadows in the corner. A little dodging in PS should fix that right up. There is a very small skin blemish on the same side cheek which is definitely a quick fix. Nice work!!!!

[Tuna]

Very nice. I like her intense stare and also the already mentioned DOF. I would recommend slightly burning in the left side of her face to define the cheek/jaw line a bit more.

Tuna

[kcaminitti]

There is discoloration under the eyes that take away from her eyes, which i think, are her best aspect. Also, there is a glare that should be edited out of her eyes in PS.

just my .02

[JULIAN]

wow! thanks for the nice comments follks! and for sure the suggestions.

yes, a bit of PS retouching will clean her up nice. thanks for the DOF comments. i was really trying to get her face to pop up from the position she's in looking up.

Do you guys think there's too much contrast between the L and R sides of her face in lighting? should that be balanced out more?