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    Concrete beast



    Shot this picture in Brazil's Capital, Brasilia, with my analog camera, on color film. Croping, B&W convertion and post processing done in Photoshop. That's one part of the magnificent Congress and Senate Buildings.

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    Re: Concrete beast

    Dear Erich,

    From a technical perspective, this photo is well exposed and no funny things happening. From a compositional standpoint, it is a little more difficult. The pair of towers is good, the form a nice border of the left and balance the composition. The sky is good and the clouds don't distract at all. The one thing I might say is, that the building on the lower right is cut off. I might have tried to get all of the building in, so as to balance the pair of tower on the left. However, that said, this is a well composed and exicuted photograph. Very nice.

    Drew
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