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    Chimneys

    Lots of angles, one vertical that doesn't look vertical, and a trace of cloud to break up the blue.
    I had hoped for a cooperative bird to sit on one of the chimney pots, but no luck.
    Does it need that extra element ?

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    Re: Chimneys

    Good blue in the sky. Concerning an extra element, would be nice if there was something flying in the upper right side, but you get what you can. I also would like it better if just the vertical wall was there and not the diagonal.

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    Re: Chimneys

    Which diagonal, GB ?
    There's so many angles, which attracted me to it.
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    Re: Chimneys

    I think he's talking about the lower hip roof abutting the chimney. A sky this blue in UK is a rare catch indeed :lol: I like this as it is.

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    Re: Chimneys

    Nice sharp image with those interesting angles. A bird sure would have been nice or perhaps a chimney sweep.
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    Re: Chimneys

    Yes, the V shaped structure connecting to the chimney wall.

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    Re: Chimneys

    Texture,patterns,lines,great color.I'm looking all over this.Very interesting.Good eye,PAul.

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    Re: Chimneys

    First chimney on left? man, I'd hate to be carrying in the fire wood, bad enough here (-11 c last night in the great brown land) , I think it's a good eye you have, not gifted to us all. And I agree, blue sky? Photo Shop..got to be.. (How's the cricket going )..

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    Re: Chimneys

    Chimneys between two houses, so each house has two rooms on each of 3 floors.
    Blue sky has clouds in, so it's OK for the UK
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    Re: Chimneys

    I happen to like the diagonal lines created by the roof ridges, it adds to the 3 dimensional perception for me. A bird or other added element like you mentioned would be nice, but you take what you're given right? I think I'd prefer at the black rubber roofed bit on the right hand side wasn't there, but I think you would've missed a good portion of the angular roof ridges that I like by cropping it out.

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    Thanks.
    I'm pretty sure that black area is leaded, not rubberised.
    But no way am I going up 3 stories to check !
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    Re: Chimneys

    I like the geometric shapes and the textures u captured here.
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    Re: Chimneys

    That would be an awesome backround for something that contrasted with the "industrial" look....a flower, a bird, a worker....something.

    Nice technical exposure, but the "Story" in the picture is thin.

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    Re: Chimneys

    I agree Len, there was a bird on the chimneys of the house next door but there were too many telephone wires to get the clean lines I wanted. Of course the bird didn't move in the 15 minutes I waited.
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    Re: Chimneys

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    I agree Len, there was a bird on the chimneys of the house next door but there were too many telephone wires to get the clean lines I wanted. Of course the bird didn't move in the 15 minutes I waited.

    Damn birds never cooperate.

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    Re: Chimneys

    Right, Birds are beyond your control. this is good alrteady.

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