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    Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    very nice image from the down south point of view.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    I like the way the color of the kite contrasts with the brilliant of the cherry tree blossoms.

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Only thing not quite quite is the boys back so close to the frame.
    Did anyone get their kites hung up in the trees?
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    I agree with Frog. I like the colors and subject.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Love the color contrasts. Its a great shot i cant find any faults with it.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    This is all about contrasts which works really well, kind of wish there were fewer people and vehicles in the distance but guess you couldn't do much about that,

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    I guess that I am the only one that can't see the picture. All I get is a box with a red X in it, Jeff
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    I like the photo a lot. The kite festival in Washington, D.C. is a great thing to attend - I did it myself many years ago.

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Thanks for the wonderful responses everyone! Here is a looser crop which only reveals more cars and people. Of course that same place earlier in the day had been FLOODED with people as the course of the Marine Corps Marathon went right through this spot. It felt like a human river!

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Nicely captured. I like the way the kite is being prepared showing family life and the picnic hamper adds an extra something.

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Cindy - It has all the right elements, but it seems more like a scattering of different things than a coherent photo with theme. The main guy and kite being centered like that bothers me a bit. The kid's almost out of the scene. Call it a 5/10. -GB
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    The main guy and kite being centered like that bothers me a bit. The kid's almost out of the scene. Call it a 5/10. -GB
    Thanks for checking it out GB, did you feel that way about the edited version with the different crop too or did I address the problem?
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    Nicely captured. I like the way the kite is being prepared showing family life and the picnic hamper adds an extra something.

    Lovely

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    Thanks Roger! I appreciate your taking the time to comment. It's great to see you're on the boards again; I have missed you.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms at the Kite Festival

    Just looking at the crop: I think it's better, but still a lot, lot of stuff happening. Seems like everyone's ignoring you ...
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