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It looks a bit too compressed to me. More space at the bottom, and at the right would let the photo breath more. Also moving the clock (?) more toward the bottom left would help the overall composition, in my opinion.
With the jpeg compression, your getting some whacky messed up lines. Might be because it's so small. I like the subjects here, and black and white looks great! Nice shooting,