Mike - Not too bad I think, getting there, starting to resemble a campfire. I think in the original that if the stick wasn't sitting in there that it may look more realistic. Also, perhaps if the 'smoke' was a little brighter and lighter colored. Finally, I'd prefer that the bowl wasn't touching or was so close to the bottom edge.

Scenes like these are sooooooo creative. I wish I had a little studio in my pad to make them. Maybe I'll convert my garage ..

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