Buses, Boats, and 777s

[Yoyo Szeto]

Welcome your comments.
yoyo

[Yoyo Szeto]

Here are the photos.

[payn817]

Love the first one. Great shapes, lines, and different sizes. Plenty to look at. The cloud in the second one keeps pulling my eyes from everything else.

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hipayn,
Thanks a lor for pointing out the weakness. Really appreciated.
yoyo

[gahspidy]

For me, the second shot has the powerful perspective of the seats in the foreground and that is important. The first shot does not quite make the staement as the second, because it looks as though the foreground was included only because it was unavoidable.
the second shot would be better if the shoreline did not start on the railing line of the boat. If you had stood up higher to get some water in between the shoreline and the boats railing, it would have made an important seperation. good ideas

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hi Gary,
Thanks a lot for the analysis and the helpful suggestions as always.
yoyo

[jar_e]

Yoyo,

Have you posted these shots before? They look familiar. There both great in black and white, and add a huge feel with their tones.

Great shooting,

Jared

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hi Jared,
Thanks for the comments. The shots had not been posted before. The second shot, with the seats in the centre, had been used but the background was different.
yoyo