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    Building shots - 3 images attached

    A few more shots of buildings, do any of these appeal to you? What suggestions do you have for improvement?
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    Re: Building shots - 3 images attached

    First of all, there's a pretty serious blue cast to the photos. Not sure why... could be corrected in software however.

    Pretty straightforward shots of the buildings. They look OK but would probably look a little better with about 1/3 to 2/3 extra f-stop exposure, as they seem a bit muted to me. I would like to see some reflections in the windows on the bottom shot. The #2 shot looks a little chopped off.. could use a wider view here (and maybe some people in the shot).

    Overall, pretty normal shots. Are you taking them for a reason such as records, etc? If taking them for artistic endeavour, you might want to add something to them. Anything, even birds, etc would add some spice to the photos.. But like I said, depends on their purpose.

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    Re: Building shots - 3 images attached

    Like GB1 said, there is a severe blue cast to the pitures. Did you use tugsten film by any chance? Or set your digital to tungsten lighting in white balance? That is what it looks like. The only photo that really holds my attention is the first one, mostly because of the angle and the slight converging of perspective lines. I would, however, give it a bit more exposure. Almost 1 to 2 stops more. Needs some work.

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