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    Brown Betty 2

    Comments welcome. Thanks for the input.

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    Re: Brown Betty 2

    Interesting shot. I like this with the black window. Definately is a huge plus for me, adds another layer to the picture. Though the grain is a little harsh, I think it works and I like it on the white.

    Good shot,

    Jared

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    a-HA!

    I like this better than the previous - stepping back a bit does help the composition. The noise dulls the pear, but that's okay, I think this is a more visually satisfying photograph.

    Megan

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    Re: Brown Betty 2

    I like this. Lots of color in a few brown objects. Feels ageless.

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    Re: Brown Betty 2

    Thank you all for the comments. I actually took a small tip from gahspidy, and kept the color on the subject, but desaturated the background. I saw one time a b&w still life of pears. The one thing I remember is that it was very grainy, and it brought out the pears very well. This is something of my version. Glad people like it.

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