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    Blue petals on moss...

    Any criticism greatly appreciated. – TF
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    Re: Blue petals on moss...

    These look a bit too perfect a little artificial to me. Colors are very decorative though.

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    Re: Blue petals on moss...

    Quote Originally Posted by OldClicker
    Any criticism greatly appreciated. – TF
    You need a fixed gear lugged Waterford.

    Oh, not that kind of criticism?

    I like the composition and color well enough but I just can't find what you were focusing on. I'd like to see the beads of water perfectly in focus but they just aren't.

    Camera movement, upload issues?

    I don't know but it just doesn't look well focused.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Blue petals on moss...

    This is as tight as I can get things. I took off the quick connect and adjustment rail and weighted everything. I'm not seeing any difference; you?. Maybe I can't get there at 1:1 with the mirror slap on the A350??? - TF

    BTW, I have an unbuilt stainless Waterford.
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    Re: Blue petals on moss...

    Pretty darn cool.
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    Re: Blue petals on moss...

    Quote Originally Posted by DLB1973
    Pretty darn cool.
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    Thanks, DLB. - TF
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