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    blue 2 (reshoot)

    Different flowers, same type. The flowers while this "young" have no pattern on them at all, and appear soft even to the eye. I tried to get one with more developed flowers this time.
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    Re: blue 2 (reshoot)

    Great colours. The "missing" petals around the top of the center leave me a bit empty, I wonder how it would have looked to shoot a with you body a little lower to try and cover that empty spot! Anywho, nice work!

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    Re: blue 2 (reshoot)

    Payn187,

    Alot better! All in focus, and a nice strong DOF. The colors are great and you greatly improved your original!

    Well done,

    Jared

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    Re: blue 2 (reshoot)

    Thanks. ME?? get on the ground, NEVER!! j/k Perhaps that would make it better. But these younger bunches end to be in the middle right now. I will have to wait till next year to try lower shots. I may get on the ground, but never climb in a bush! There may be spiders in there!! Snakes are no prob..

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    Re: blue 2 (reshoot)

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    Different flowers, same type. The flowers while this "young" have no pattern on them at all, and appear soft even to the eye. I tried to get one with more developed flowers this time.
    Nicely captured and I like the way the details have come out in the open flowers.
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    Re: blue 2 (reshoot)

    Very well composed and nice colors. I like the richness and saturation of this image. You have made the flowers come alive. Good job.
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