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    B&W Portrait

    This is something a little different for me. A candid portrait of my son taken in front of a restaurant in Nashville. I'm not great with PS as most of you know. I tried a B&W conversion and softened slightly. I would appreciate any advice on how to improve my technique.
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    Re: B&W Portrait

    I like how shy but still open to the photo he looks. I think it gives us a glimpse of who he is...I think it was successful...I'd up the contrast a smidge but I think it's framed well...
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    Re: B&W Portrait

    For a candid this sure has everything I would look for in a posed shot. It's very well done OT. If it were me or a loved one I would be proud to display it.

    My one niggle is the coller of his vest cutting into his cheek. It gives me the sence that there is something being hidden.

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    Re: B&W Portrait

    Thanks Nat and Almo I appreciated your comments about this image. I for some reason can't seem to achieve the look I want from b&w they usually have too much contrast I tried cutting it down a bit here may have gone to far. David is a very gentle and loving son and husband. I felt this image rather captured that in him. He is an architect by day and a marathon runner by night or morning or when ever he can find the time to run. I hope this grab shot captured something of his nature.
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    Re: B&W Portrait

    could you post the color one, so I could play with it...then I could share what I got...
    it always gives me good practice to note what it takes to convert it--I'm still learning to try and get the same type of look as film(probabaly never happen)
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    Re: B&W Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by natatbeach
    could you post the color one, so I could play with it...then I could share what I got...
    it always gives me good practice to note what it takes to convert it--I'm still learning to try and get the same type of look as film(probabaly never happen)
    Thanks Nat. Here you go have at it.

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    Re: B&W Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by Old Timer
    Thanks Nat. Here you go have at it.

    Larry
    Sorry posted the wrong image in the previous reply. Here is the one I worked with the firsst time. Hope you can improve it.

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    Re: B&W Portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by Old Timer
    Sorry posted the wrong image in the previous reply. Here is the one I worked with the firsst time. Hope you can improve it.

    Larry
    Here's my try. It seemed to me that this third shot is a bit over exposed. The second shot seems like a better exposure. The first thing I did was a histogram adjustment to try and correct the flatness from the over exposure. The I did a split to RGB to do the conversion to B/W. I liked the overall tones of the red channel but liked the skintones better on the green channel so I copied the head (feathered a couple pixels) from the green to a layer on the red channel. You can control opacity of this layer if you want to get a blend of the two but I left it full strength and flattened the image. Since you mentioned softening, I made a duplicate layer, applied a 3 pixel gaussian blur (probably want it blurrier on a larger original) and reduced the opacity to 28%.

    Edit - Oh, yeah, I erased the blur layer in the eyes.
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    Re: B&W Portrait

    Good looking portrait for a good looking son

    Good for you pal ;)

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    Re: B&W Portrait

    here's my take---not far from yours email me at natalie.holl@gmail.com and I will send it to you as PSD document so you can see what I did to it...if ya want. Thanks for the practice
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