Betty,

I don't know what it is, but the first one is literally like the scene out of a vivid dream. I think it might be the softness of the details and bluish tint (since supposedly we don't dream in color?). Whatever it is though, it's almost like you've freezed a frame from an eerie movie scene and posted it here. I really like this one.

The second shot isn't bad, but I think there's a little too much going on / the angle is a little off. Either way, see if you can reproduce the feeling / artistic vision you got at the first place, when shooting elsewhere. It's a really neat look.