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    Aspiring Photographer mindikollphotos's Avatar
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    Please give me all of your thoughts, and observations.

    These are not the highest resolution.
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    I'm a beginner photographer experimenting with lighting, and different editing techniques in photoshop cs3, and paint shop pro.

    I'd like critiques from both sides of the camera. A photographer's point of view, and what you would like to see if the picture was of you (or your child) and you'd paid to have these taken. My ultimate goal is to improve my technique and style, and be the best that I can be.

    Your help is appreciated!

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    Re: Another

    No thoughts? Good or Bad?
    I'm a beginner photographer experimenting with lighting, and different editing techniques in photoshop cs3, and paint shop pro.

    I'd like critiques from both sides of the camera. A photographer's point of view, and what you would like to see if the picture was of you (or your child) and you'd paid to have these taken. My ultimate goal is to improve my technique and style, and be the best that I can be.

    Your help is appreciated!

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    Re: Another

    I hoped some one with more portrait experience that I would respond but I guess you'll have to take my non-pro opinion. I think the composition is nice and gives the impression of a happy mother and children.
    I think the soft focus is too much but that might be personal taste.
    Maybe if you try it again you can find something to get your youngest to look toward the camera. There's good eye contact with you and the girls. I think you shot with a remote or shutter delay and perhaps if someone were to call his name or make a noise he would look toward the camera.
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