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Please give me all of your thoughts, and observations.

These are not the highest resolution.

No thoughts? Good or Bad?

I hoped some one with more portrait experience that I would respond but I guess you'll have to take my non-pro opinion. I think the composition is nice and gives the impression of a happy mother and children.
I think the soft focus is too much but that might be personal taste.
Maybe if you try it again you can find something to get your youngest to look toward the camera. There's good eye contact with you and the girls. I think you shot with a remote or shutter delay and perhaps if someone were to call his name or make a noise he would look toward the camera.