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    Re: Untitled

    Great street shot! I like the perspective, and I think you made a good choice to use b&w.

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    Re: Untitled

    Quote Originally Posted by rebcastillo77
    Great street shot! I like the perspective, and I think you made a good choice to use b&w.
    Thank you Reb!

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    Very nice way to isolate the subject, especially with so many people around him. He has a great expression too. I do question the centering. It seems like there is a lot of space that he is looking at with no clue as to what he might being staring at. Did you pose him or was this spontaneous?

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    What if it were cropped just to the left of the two posts. This removes those with their backs to us and magnifies that those walking toward us are also somewhat looking where the main subject is looking. - Terry
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    Re: Untitled

    Quote Originally Posted by OldClicker
    What if it were cropped just to the left of the two posts. This removes those with their backs to us and magnifies that those walking toward us are also somewhat looking where the main subject is looking. - Terry
    Yeah, that does work. Makes it less busy as well.

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    Good shot, but I can't get past judging the massive person on the left. Jeez....

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    Busy but in a good way. I also agree that the choice for a b&w is perfect. No one can argue with your composition skills. Nice job.
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