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the top one is a bit too static. the dead area around the abstract is too distracting.. i like the second one.. nice and tight. watch those corners though, the solid blacks can be problematic sometimes.
bottom shot very nice. Definetely appealing and interesting. The top one is static as stated before. I'm thinking that either get it even and symetrical with the frame or completely twist it and zoom in more. I like
The top one is not symmetrical enough to make it work.
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Funny thing is, I come up with these things on rainy days when I am off work(can't go shoot), and do it just to pass time. Never expect anyone to like them. I liked the way they turned out as well, and I will retry the first one.
By the way, this is looking through a pyrex bowl. The first one is a tv only, the second is two lamps and a tv.