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    photo gallery Mod. starriderrick's Avatar
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    Exclamation @ First

    Full moon light / 30 seconds, WB2500k. I worked this in Post w/ Capture NX. I liked the results. Would it be nice to hear what you think? YES.
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    Rick
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    Larger res. 1200 x 1800 in my gallery.
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    Re: @ First

    I really like the colors on this shot. There are some nice gradients going on. There is also a good sense of depth, with a definite foreground, middle ground and background.

    On the negative side, I'm not quite sure what this is a photo of. The title makes me think it should be the sign "@First" but that doesn't strike me as all that interesting. My eye is drawn to the building and the crain but the sign seems to be obscuring my line of sight which I find a bit distracting.

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    Re: @ First

    I really like some of the recent photo's you have posted Rick, and this is no exception. The colour is nice and the silhouette of the construction is nice.

    However, that moon really kills it for me. It's bright and harsh, where nothing else in the scene is.
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    Re: @ First

    Hi Rick,
    I like the graduating-saturated-blue colour. Is is possible to shoot without the two wooden boards in the shot? If yes, I guess the photo would be more prominent. Thanks for sharing.
    yoyo

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    Re: @ First

    Thanks guys....Very good feedback { Wow... I'm learning alot lately.} :O)

    I thought about cloning out the whole moon also, I have another version without the sign. I initially felt the sign was important as it shows the intended project design. Stay tuned, let me see what's hiding on the SD card. I appreciate your thoughts.

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