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Lori11
07-06-2008, 07:31 AM
THis is mother and baby (and baby lol) What do you think? I am learning "people" and want to improve

Frog
07-06-2008, 07:35 AM
The first has compositional problems to me with legs and hands being chopped off. Would look better vertical.
Some of the more skilled will tell you about light problems I suppose but the second shot had great composition to me and the third has REALLY GREAT composiiton.

Lori11
07-06-2008, 07:43 AM
Thanks! The first one was cropped that way ( I will try to fix the hands) due to the way she had to sit, she is due in 3 weeks so everything is an effort for her lol I will go work on redoing the crop though ty :D

mn shutterbug
07-06-2008, 09:12 AM
Nice shots, but I think the last 2 are begging for a little fill flash. Then again, what do I know? I shoot birds. :D

Lori11
07-06-2008, 09:32 AM
I dont flash my clients, even if they beg :lol: Heck, I shoot bikes, so what do I know LOL

Grandpaw
07-06-2008, 09:33 AM
Nice shots! :thumbsup: The one thing that I would like to see changed is a different angle on #2 & #3 so that it wouldn't look like that plant in the back ground was growing out of their heads. Any time you take a picture indoors or out you need to be aware of what else is in the picture, especially behind and over the subjects heads, Jeff