View Full Version : Rainbow


andywatson00
04-26-2008, 02:14 PM
Taken out of my front window hope you like ( my first atempt at using multi layers )

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Frog
04-26-2008, 03:14 PM
just says invalid attachment

andywatson00
04-26-2008, 03:42 PM
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2nd atempt to post home it works this time

Frog
04-26-2008, 06:25 PM
I like the light and exposure Could you get the rainbow to move from behind the tree..probably not.
I would like to see a bit more foreground and of course I'm saying that without knowing what's there but I think it would improve with more foreground and less sky.
Nice catch.

polarbeardiggers
04-26-2008, 06:58 PM
i like this shot alot it has alot of potential, but not thrilled with the blur effect around the tops of the tree's , most likely the result of your multi layered effect, perhaps we could see the original shot without the mixing layers,its a very attractive and busy area,good composition.

SmartWombat
04-27-2008, 02:55 AM
The layering doesn't work, IMO.
They aren't registered properly, did the lamp post and the flagpole really bend that much in the wind ?

My first thought was it was a split ND filter, with very little graduation.
Now I realise it's just a straight line in the layering.
I don't think that works either, because you have trees crossing that horizontal artificial horizon where you split the layers.

Ptax
04-27-2008, 04:50 AM
iperhaps we could see the original shot without the mixing layers,

I agree with PBD. I think the original picture would be interesting to see.

MB1
04-28-2008, 09:13 AM
Nice idea and the right subject for it but your execution needs work.

Grandpaw
04-28-2008, 03:22 PM
To add to what has already been said, you need to fix whatever you were trying to do with the lite post to the right of the car, it has a double image, Jeff

andywatson00
04-29-2008, 12:40 AM
heres the photo before editing as requested


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freygr
04-29-2008, 08:07 AM
If you going to do layering you need to use a tripod.

GB1
04-29-2008, 07:35 PM
Its got some nice even lighting. I like the geometry of the foreground and all, but like Frog noted, the actual rainbow is partially obscured. I also wish it was larger and higher (but we always wish rainbows were exactly the right size and where we want them....)

I like the exposure of the first one btw. Successful layering I would say..

G

andywatson00
04-30-2008, 05:46 AM
i think i could have done it better, when i have time ill try again, thanks for the comments