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Don Schaeffer
03-28-2008, 07:33 PM
From the bus window using full 760 mm equ with wicon.

GB1
03-28-2008, 08:09 PM
Ok, not bad. But I would like to see more area around her feet.. seems like they're almost out of the scene, and there's just so much space above her head instead. But it does make her seem short, an interesting effect.........

rylan
03-28-2008, 08:29 PM
i would also like to see more space by her feet and less up top.
nice shot

Frog
03-28-2008, 10:24 PM
Crop vertical from left almost up to her back and also on top and her feet won't seem too close to frame anymore.
I like this one, Don.

Len J
03-29-2008, 06:14 PM
Crop vertical from left almost up to her back and also on top and her feet won't seem too close to frame anymore.
I like this one, Don.

What a great thought.

Len

MB1
03-31-2008, 05:28 AM
You got great lighting for this one.

It seems odd that the fence gets taller behind her which it the opposit of what perspective tells us will happen.

I too think you have a bit too much frame space above her and not quite enough below her but I don't think a crop from the left will improve this image as I think the long line of the fence adds a lot.

Don Schaeffer
04-01-2008, 05:33 PM
Thanks guys.

Don Schaeffer
04-01-2008, 05:34 PM
You got great lighting for this one.

It seems odd that the fence gets taller behind her which it the opposit of what perspective tells us will happen.

I too think you have a bit too much frame space above her and not quite enough below her but I don't think a crop from the left will improve this image as I think the long line of the fence adds a lot.


It's a longlens--therefore magnifies the morse distant objects more than nearer ones.