View Full Version : Man in front of Pawnshop


Don Schaeffer
03-28-2008, 07:28 PM
from a bus window. Telecon was mounted by camera was unzoomed. This is probably close to 75 mm equiv..

CanonFan
03-29-2008, 05:30 AM
I like it but the washed out bricks in the upper left are a bit too much. The "Open" sign is also a bit washed out. Would this have been a little better if you were a few feet to your left when you shot?

Greg McCary
03-29-2008, 12:35 PM
I like the angle very much. I think it would be better if you had the gentlemans feet in the shot though. Nice work Don.

Don Schaeffer
03-29-2008, 12:48 PM
Taken from a bus. Beggers can't be chosers. I would never have shot this without the protection of a bus.

Greg McCary
03-29-2008, 12:54 PM
Taken from a bus. Beggers can't be chosers. I would never have shot this without the protection of a bus.

I know what you mean Don. The last one I posted was in a pretty bad part of town.

rylan
03-29-2008, 01:00 PM
is it really that rough there? lol is it not safe to walk down the street and take pictures of ppl?

spiraleyes
03-29-2008, 03:10 PM
Don, I actually like that picture. Of the "bus window" shots that you've posted, this is by far the best, IMO.

Greg McCary
03-29-2008, 03:34 PM
is it really that rough there? lol is it not safe to walk down the street and take pictures of ppl?

There are drug deals going on in the same area I am in at times. And I am carrying a camera. Think about it. Sorry Don. I am not hijacking a thread or getting to far off of the subject of critiques. I like this one and can relate.

rylan
03-29-2008, 03:39 PM
haha good point greg, i dont care here, ill take a picture of someone anyways aha

Len J
03-29-2008, 06:30 PM
I love the general composition, the subjects and the "mood".

The blown out bricks, not so much......but it is a great image even with the bricks.

Len

Ptax
03-29-2008, 06:44 PM
Of the "bus window" shots that you've posted, this is by far the best, IMO.

I agree.

The gentleman looks like an interesting character. Nice shot.