Here is another shot I thought I would share with you all.

C&C is always welcomed!

Nic

Hi Nic,,,this image has heaps of potential...Lighting is really good,,,its soft but still has some punch...Exposure is spot on too..But here are a few glaring problems with it...On my monitor there appears to be a red/magenta cast with can be easily corrected with your editing programme..The top of your subject's head has been chopped off which obviously can't be rectified..Also her left hand (as we view) is just hanging there in space...I would have tried to get her to rest her hand on her thigh or even on her hips..Hands are one of the most difficult element to get right especially with inexperienced models...

Otherwise,,nice image..

Jurgen

First off, welcome to PR.com!
It's hard to really comment on photographs like these, at least for me anyway.
Technically, it's great the lighting is good and even and sets a little mood, and the model looks great.

I think you cropped her head a little close, which detracts a little bit, so make sure you watch that when you are shooting.

Make sure you check out all of the other forums at least once, there's a lot of great information to be found here!

Brian
Keep Shooting!
:thumbsup:

There is a light magenta cast which dissipates toward the bottom of the image which is not inappropriate since I think white would be too bright in that background area. There is a light blue shade to the sheet on the bed and the pillows look white. Since the shade differences are extremely minor, I don't find that they detract from the model or the shot.

The hand and the head problems have already been indicated.

Ronnoco

Thnaks guys for the tips...I will try to be more careful next time :)