View Full Version : Mural Depicting Downtown


Don Schaeffer
11-26-2006, 09:58 AM
http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/muralSM.jpg

Frog
11-26-2006, 03:32 PM
Great mural.
If you cropped it any, I'd go back and get that top corner of the building back in.
Its a bit dark too.....maybe can be lightened up in post edit or if its near your wait for better light.
I think the angle works but needs more on the left.

Thanks for showing it.

jbaldocchi
11-26-2006, 04:00 PM
Hi Don,

Cool image. The lawn and the poles almost look like the're part of the mural.

Jim B.

J-Dogg Productions
11-26-2006, 04:28 PM
i like the mural i agree with jbaldocchi if i didnt read his comment id think the grass adn poles are pert of the pic mtoo

great shot

Ronnoco
11-26-2006, 06:08 PM
Darken the sky and lighten the mural in postprocessing or layer a software graduated blue filter over your photo controlling the transparency.

Ronnoco

Greg McCary
11-26-2006, 06:12 PM
I agree with the others on the lighting, but another strong composition Don.
Greg

GB1
11-26-2006, 07:17 PM
Very artsy shot. I agree with everything Frog wrote. Also agree that it has a little too much blue. But it was a good capture overall and it appears that your low angle worked well, with a few tech issues that might be correctable.

This place calls for a reshoot........

GB

Don Schaeffer
11-27-2006, 09:39 AM
Thanks for your comments. I agree about exposure.

MB1
11-27-2006, 11:25 AM
Now this one I really like. I would like to see the same image with better light (is it on the north side of a building?).

I really like your crop and the way the foreground blends in with the mural.

Don Schaeffer
11-27-2006, 08:46 PM
Carbon:

Yes, north side of the building

readingr
11-28-2006, 02:20 AM
Don,

I agree with Carbon on lighting. I would also like to see a bit more room around the building.

Other than that I like it a lot.

Roger

Don Schaeffer
11-28-2006, 08:34 PM
Thanks Roger