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Yoyo Szeto
07-19-2006, 07:07 AM
I hope you are not fed up with this series. Welcome your thoughts.
yoyo

Seb
07-19-2006, 07:35 AM
I hope you are not fed up with this series. Welcome your thoughts.
yoyo


The trees in the water are amusing. I get that strange impression that they are actually characters swimming toward the mountains in the distance. I am not found of the tones in the sky but the picture still works for me because of it's content.

Seb

Overbeyond
07-19-2006, 09:18 AM
Not working so well for me this one Yoyo. On first sight I felt this one does not work with the vertical letterbox and I still feel this. Maybe it's because I feel the mountains are too central. Perhaps more foreground water and less sky would suit the format better. It's crying out for a more rectangular shape to facilitate more of this interesting scene.
Tom

Coastal Flyer
07-19-2006, 11:23 AM
The trees in the water are a bit disconcerting however have certainly seen this before. I would like to see more detail in the sky but still a nice photograph. Not bored at all with your series; some very nice work overall.

CF

Dylan8i
07-19-2006, 03:26 PM
at first glance i liked this photo alot. but i think the main problem is the trees in the foreground and the island? - land in the back fight for your attention. if you were to lessen the amount of sky and add more water to the lower part, as others have said, i think it would have shifted more attention to the trees, and used the land as more of a background.

GB1
07-19-2006, 04:06 PM
I think it's a nice view and set of subjects. I think this shot would look pretty nice printed out and framed with a medium to thick dark matte. GB

Yoyo Szeto
07-19-2006, 06:41 PM
Hi Seb, You are right about the bland sky. I wish that it were more dramatic.

Hi Tom, Yes, a square format is better. Thanks for pointing that out.

Hi CF, The place is a wetland. The trees are mangroves which inhabit in seawater.

Hi GB, Thanks for the encouragement and the printing suggestion.

Hi Dylan, Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

yoyo