I'll reprint this again tomorrow at school, but other than it bein too dark, what do you think and what could have been better.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/motosquid/manequin.jpg

I don't mind the tones here, I like this "dark" style that comes through. However, the background/roof is awfully busy. Especially when your doing black and white, lights are exposed and seem ten times as bright...I find myself looking more at the lights than the maniquins (sp?). I love this idea, though a few minor things IMO.

Well done,

Jared

thanks. i see what you mean though, the background really is busy.