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Fotowillem
03-15-2006, 10:06 AM
Mamiya 6MF+50mm

McMadCow
03-15-2006, 10:50 AM
This is a fun moment you caught. Great tones and great DOF. I don't know if I would really call it a "portrait" since the subjects don't seem to be interacting with the photographer, however I do think it is a very nice picture. There is an honest, candid feel to it, and I'm definitely drawn to it. Great job!

readingr
03-15-2006, 11:21 AM
Wouldn't this be classed as street photography, whatever it is its an excellent capture. I like the expressions on their faces and the tonal quality of the picture really make the children stand out.

Composition with the boy with the ball is inspirational.

Roger

jar_e
03-15-2006, 12:07 PM
Great tones and a wonderful "portrait" (or whatever you want to call it) shot. The expression is priceless and I love the background...it's subtle but it adds to the story

Well done!

OldSchool
03-15-2006, 12:39 PM
Hi FW,

Interesting expressions. A very nice job on the capture.

However, there is something that bothers me a little about this. How much post processing did you do? It looks like there are PP halo's around your subjects -- especially their faces. In fact, the boy's faces seems to pop a little too much. If you did do some PP here, you might try and blend it in a bit more.

However if you didn't do much PP, then please withdraw this comment. I'm on the road working from an LCD screen (laptop). It doesn't do a good job rendering images (and thus maybe I shouldn't critique).

Cheers,
Tim

McMadCow
03-15-2006, 01:31 PM
However, there is something that bothers me a little about this. How much post processing did you do? It looks like there are PP halo's around your subjects -- especially their faces. In fact, the boy's faces seems to pop a little too much.


I'm seeing that too... not just your LCD. It didn't distract me as much, however, since it's so confined.

walterick
03-15-2006, 06:47 PM
Willem -

Always nice to see you up here!

I love the composition and the expression on their faces. Classic, I thought it was your wok before I even noticed who posted it :D

I also noticed right away that there seemed to be an "overly digital" quality to this shot, especially contrasted to your other work.

Nice job!

Rick

gahspidy
03-15-2006, 08:23 PM
I like the tones and the moment is good. I too notice a "digital processed" quality about this. It almost looks to me as if the two boys were cut and pasted into another picture. However, I think it has a "wierd in a good way" type of quality to it