mtbbrian
08-21-2005, 02:58 PM
Same place as the previous one, Park City, Utah.
I saw this one and figured it would be a good Holga photograph because it was already square.
Does it work?
Thanks!
Brian
http://gallery.photographyreview.com/data/photography/500/214966Cafe.jpg
The distortion of the Holga makes this look Asian or Eastern as opposed to an Italian coffee shop. Perhaps that works. Not sure about this one because of that anomaly in appearance.
gahspidy
08-22-2005, 06:57 AM
Colors are nice here and dreamy effect always welcome, but I agree with DRG that the distortions sort of curve this into an Asian looking architecture and I'm not sure if it does this any harm or benefit.
megan
08-22-2005, 05:45 PM
Hm, I don't know. It needs something more - either in closer or out further.
Or....
More. Cowbell.
Megan
(Okay. Sorry. I'm a little punchy and in a goofy mood. But seriously! I do think it needs to be in closer or further away - the composition is a little haphazard, and I think the interest in the subject needs to be more defined - either on the people framed within the coffee shop, or stepping further out for frames within frames within frames. Does that make sense?)