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erich_vasconcelos
06-08-2005, 11:39 AM
http://gallery.photographyreview.com/data/photography/524/medium/242520benk-trondheim-web.jpg

There's this tranquil park in the middle of Trondheim, and it was there I tok this shot. (Sometimes it can be warm in Norway! I said sometimes!). Again, I shot this analog, with post-processing in Photoshop.

Yeah! You can see a much bigger version on this picture here! (http://gallery.photographyreview.com/data/photography/524/242520benk-trondheim-web.jpg)

Good or bad composition?

gahspidy
06-09-2005, 08:17 AM
I like th scene you were seeing and the red building in bg compliment nicely with all the green. I don't feel the two trrees framing in the foreground is working well. One of them should go. It feels too tight or cramped. I think moving in a bit to remove the tree in the right side fg would open it up a bit.{speaking of the trunk area, the branches are good) Also, I think it would work better if there was not so much light on the trees in fg and lesser lighting was only shining down in the bench area. Maybe different time of day.

Chunk
06-09-2005, 09:53 AM
A nice feeling of quiet isolation. I think you could remove the spotlighted can/cup/whateveritis in the lowere left foreground.