When you say "Shot these" this is one image, no? The upper version is a tight crop of the original. I like the crop and the noise that went along with it. There is a dreamy look about it and her pose and expression is working.
I feel that the original is somewhat unflattering of her. The low angle I guess is making her body and legs look very large and her head small. Also the fact that the white background coming through under her arms against the white dress add to the perception that her body is bigger.
I dunno, there is lots of reasons to like it as well, and so I may be alone in this opinion.
Love the PP, my kinda thing