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    banished Don Schaeffer's Avatar
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    High Orb Spinner

     

     
    Ugly,
    built for what it does
    with pragmatic
    decorations that
    make it uglier,
    the monster walks
    for topsy-turvy
    days to the
    cross-arm of the
    utility pole.
    Then it's far away with cables
    hanging from anus-arms,
    victim of the breezes.
    What does it know about webs:
    map in its
    disparate brain circuits
    or mere twists and turns,
    embedded sequences
    like a knitting machine?

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    Re: High Orb Spinner

    Nice, Don! I wish I could see the photo a little bigger. But I dig the poem and the photo together
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    Re: High Orb Spinner

    Thanks John, very much. You won't believe the terrible things some people said about this poem. Anyway, I did choose the wrong photo for this. I wanted to show how far away the spider was--bad idea.

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    Re: High Orb Spinner

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer View Post
    Thanks John, very much. You won't believe the terrible things some people said about this poem. Anyway, I did choose the wrong photo for this. I wanted to show how far away the spider was--bad idea.
    What kind of terrible things? And what kind of people? I commend you for being willing to share your poetry, here (I assume it's your poem, anyway).
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    Re: High Orb Spinner

    On another site. I got comments that I shouldn't foist such bad poetry on people and that it was the worst they'd ever seen. I figure they haven't seen too much poetry. Thanks for your kindness, John.

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