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    Keep it clean.

    My 8 year old and her favorite passtime. C&C please.
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    Re: Keep it clean.

    haha, funny catch!

    In the bright reflections on her tongue and eye, the shadow under her chin, and the reflection of the coat, I can tell that a flash was used and pointing towards her. If you diffuse the light somehow, you can make for a softer effect which looks more like natural light.

    I'd also change the hue of the carpet, the hue it is right now is really not complimenting the colors of her coat.

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    Re: Keep it clean.

    Yikes, what a catch. Great close up photography. I don't like the background but what can you do, it's more important to catch the moment. I wish the cat's eye was a little more prominent too. The tongue is great.. and scary. Imagine what a mouse sees at the last minute!

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