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    Taken at Homestead AFB a few weeks back, any suggestions for improvement?
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    Re: Zero

    Not really. Except I would love to see more I love aircraft shots. Is that a P-47?

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    Re: Zero

    My bad that a Jap zero isn't it?

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    Re: Zero

    jetrim, you have my curiosity up as to how you took this shot in the clouds at the same level of the plane? Were you standing on top of your car? LOL Jeff
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    Re: Zero

    Lol..............I wondered how you did it, too. I don't know how you could improve it. I don't see anything I don't like. You can see the dude's face!
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    Re: Zero

    Don't know enough to suggest any improvements, love it just the way it is, any more ?
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    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

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    Re: Zero

    It's all about playing the angles with these shots. I was standing in the middle off the crowd on the ground near "show center" to get all 900+ shots I took that day. Often you can catch these planes either coming out of a loop or when they rock their wings back and forth down the straightaway. The trick is in timing the shutter release, and it doesn't always work out as planned (got maybe 5 out of over 100 attempts). Here's a couple more:
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    Re: Zero

    You must live in flatter country than I to get these as if you are flying alongside with no land background. Really like the second shot in your second set.
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    Re: Zero

    Some very nice shots, I would suggest a slightly slower shutter to get more blur on the props and give the feeling of speed. It is slightly more difficult but I think worth the effort.

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    Bill, I know I could have done a bit better on the prop blur and may take a stab at it in post processing. Lighting was in an ever changing state of flux and just keeping up with the exposure was a chore with the sun dipping in and out of the clouds that were moving through at about 25kts.

    Frog, the biggest mountain range in this part of FL is 50 miles north of me and shoots skyward an astounding 45' above sea level, it's about 2500"wide and runs for an incredible 4 miles in length, so "flat" is pretty much an understatement!
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    Re: Zero

    I much prefer the second one in your second post, the angle and composition is great - I like the way the plane overlaps the larger plane.

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    Re: Zero

    Well.... this is my 1st photo critique
    All I can say is WOW very nice
    I like them all but the one I like the most is the P51 in front of the F-16

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    Re: Zero

    this photos demonstrate that all the rough training shooting girls in little bikinis really pays off :thumbsup:

    kidding aside ... great photos!

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    Re: Zero

    looks like excellent work to me. Maybe this is why you're Jet
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    Re: Zero

    Thanks for the kind words everyone!

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    Re: Zero

    Great work! Nothing to critique as far as I'm concerned.

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