some fashion

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some stuff is shot last sunday. 1st+2nd pic was between some high gras near a river, the other ones were all taken infront of a modern art museum in munich.

here are some making of´s



hope you like the pics and I´d love to get some critique. :thumbsup:

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is it realy that bad?

[jetrim]

Lighting on the first shot is flawless, nice tight crop as well - nothing to critique here
# 2 Model looks great, nice pose and good lighting, but not thrilled w/ background (especially light pole) and think it may have been better to rotate camera to the right just a bit to include more of model's left arm.
# 3 May not be over exposed but gives the illusion that highlights are clipped on legs / forearms / face. Least favorite of the set, but still very good creative effort.
# 4 Like this a lot. One minor nit-pick is that the hard shadows created by the key light being so close are creating a conflict at the shoes, as the shadow appears at first glance to be part of the shoe on the foot that has heal raised off floor.
# 5 Excellent job on a very difficult exposure! Like the composition on this one very much as well.

[jetrim]

is it realy that bad?

Don't be alarmed. There aren't a whole lot of people here that are comfortable critiquing model shots in general. Many will look, but not so many will comment

[Frog]

That's why I haven't commented. GB does a lot of model shoots.
I actually do like the 'making ofs' though

[LeeIs]

I really like the last one. Good pose, love the lines of the stairs. exposure is good.

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thx 4 the comments