Lilly, an attempt of some close up

[Dave6223]

Took this today, it just opened up. I used a Sigma 24mm Zuiko manual focus with a 2x converter to kive the effect of an extension tube. 1/180 at f22 with 2xOlympus T32 flashguns at full output to try and maintain DOF.

What do you think?

Dave

[PhoebeG]

Need to get some part in sharp focus, its kinda soft all over. Noting beats a true macro lens for this type of work.

Also, not sure I like the use of flash in this.

Just my opinions.

Phil G.

[AgingEyes]

On my monitor it looks like it's under-exposed. Composition-wise I would crop some off the right (see the dark triangular hole on the right?). I would do some post-processing and sharpen it.

[jetrim]

I think it's far better than my first attempt at flower close-ups, but that said AE has given you some very good advice for improvement. I believe sharpening without overdoing it will help this shot immensely. Love the color though!