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    Stairs w Traffic Cone

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    Re: Stairs w Traffic Cone

    To me having the focus point where it is stops my eye from wanting to go down the stairs. I wonder what this same shot would look like with the focus on the cone, Jeff
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    Re: Stairs w Traffic Cone

    My thoughts the same as Jeff's.
    It is an interesting composition.
    Maybe if you can change the focal point or get a lot more dof.
    I'd also try to get rid of whatever is next to the cone.
    If I was shooting this I think I'd try something f'/16 or smaller and make my focus point the bottom of the stairs or the cone. You have a static subject so you can try various f/stops and focus points.
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    Re: Stairs w Traffic Cone

    Honestly, I think I'd like this better without the cone, as odd as that might sound, and for sure that black and yellow thing has got to go. I'm a BIG fan of color, but color for the sake of color isn't enough, it has to add something to the shot that wouldn't be there without the color.

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