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    Outlook

    From a pin up model shoot last Sunday. Someone else's idea to have the model looking out from the window of the aircraft. I think it was an excellent concept, but also think that the window and metal are probably too dirty. Your comments?
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    Re: Outlook

    I'm with you GB.
    Too much glare on the plexy. Might have worked later in the day.
    nice shots otherwise. I like her expression and your composition in both.
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    Re: Outlook

    Yeah... with that much glare it's not a winner I'm afraid. If only there was no window in the way...
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    Re: Outlook

    the concept is very cool! The glass unfortunately looks dirty. what a fun idea though!

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    Re: Outlook

    THanks everyone, guess my feelings were shared on this one. I should have gotten a long water hose and ran it from the building and washed off the window beforehand!

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    Re: Outlook

    I like it! I guess I will go out on a limb here and say I think the condition of the window adds to the old feel. If the window would have been perfectly clean and clear it would have changed the mood entirely and would not have been as good, Jeff
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    Re: Outlook

    I really like the feel of this shot works very, very well except for the window dirt, so it seemed like it was worthy of trying to save it. I did some corrections but hesitate to push it much further than this as it starts getting into major surgery. What do you think?
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