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    floor

    One of my first photos taken with the new Pentax K10d.....what do you think?
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    Re: floor

    Hey, welcome to the forum and it is good to see another Pentaxian here ...There is now 6 of us, LOL....But this is about ''critique''
    The colors are good and it is different...iT reminds me of Dons spilled coffee image that got some good reviews. I would be curious to read others opinions.
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    Re: floor

    I'm another Pentaxian, but my K100D Super collects dust at the moment, I'm heavily into film at the moment ;-)

    The right hand side really catches my eye. Other than that, I'm not quite sure what to make of it. Sorry....
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    Re: floor

    Looks a little like a satellite shot.
    Basically its texture with nothing else to look at and if it was untitled no one would know what they were looking at.
    You'll need another element to give some sort of context.
    Keep experimenting....that's how we learn.
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    Re: floor

    Nice abstract image. It takes a good eye to see a photo there.

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    Re: floor

    Nice subject and one that will always be there to re-shoot (although that ice may not last).

    I would like to see the image with the grooves in the floor squared up to the frame and with slightly warmer light.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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