I would have opened the left side a bit, to show the corner of the goalpost and crossbar.
It gives more sense of where he is in the goal.
I don't think you've lost the height in that second crop.
We know how tall the goal is to the crossbar.
Well maybe we all don't

FA rules: The distance between the posts is 7.32m (8yds) and the distance from the lower edge of the crossbar to the ground is 2.44m (8ft).
Modifications:
Mini-Soccer: 12 feet wide x 6 feet high
Youth (11-14 age): 21 feet wide x 7 feet high
Youth (15-16 age): 24 feet wide x 8 feet high