The Bottle

[veggie]

Hi, any comments very much appreciated.

[euphoria]

Very unique =) I like the colors but I would try and brighten it just a smidge if you have photoshop or something...

[veggie]

Unfortunatly, I don't have it. Im planning on getting aperture this month though.

Please feel free to play with this picture. I'd love to see what you can do with it.

Thanks!!

[Frog]

Can you try b/w ?

[Christian Simpson]

i think i have to agree with the black and white proposal...but great composition

[veggie]

Here it is in b&w.
IMO it looses a lot, I think what I liked was the pink on pink.
What do you think?

[CLKunst]

Hi Veggie,

Welcome to the critique forum. This is an interesting image with a creative angle. I think it only needs some fine tuning. Make some adjustments to your brightness and contrast levels for your color image, with all those bright colors this could really POP more than it is, be careful not to over do it though. I wouldn't even bother with the black and white conversion on this one since your textures and shapes are less of a focal point than your colors. I have attached an edit I made of your image. The only thing I affected was the brightness and contrast adjustments which should be available to you on any photo editing software in some form or another. A good first submission.

Regards,
CLKunst

[Frog]

You're right......the black and white doesn't work

[veggie]

Thanks CLKunst! Im wondering now if a combo of what CLKunst did, and what Frog suggested:
The bottle ring and the t-**** the light pink, and the rest of the picture b&w.