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    comments...?

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    Re: zero

    I find the background distracting. I think if you could go with a pure white background and a high key approach you might have something.

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    Re: zero

    Black or a constant dark coulour could be good with the right lighting.

    I thought you'd done a brilliant job of alinging all the candles until I realised they are all joined together.

    I'm sure that there are loads of angles that you could get great photos from this subject.

    Hope you do re-shoot this and post the results.
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    Re: zero

    Change angle and background, play with combinatoins of lighting, at the moment it just look like a circle of candles to me, not particuary visually appealing though teh objects do have potential.

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    Re: zero

    Quote Originally Posted by LauriePriest
    Change angle and background, play with combinatoins of lighting, at the moment it just look like a circle of candles to me, not particuary visually appealing though teh objects do have potential.
    Perfectly said!
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