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Thread: Yeshiva Shoot

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    Exclamation Yeshiva Shoot

    I came in contact with a Dutch photographer while he was on a trip in Israel, and he wanted o see the ultra-orthodox lifestyle so i took him to a yeshiva, in proximity to where I live and these pictures are from there.

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    Re: Yeshiva Shoot

    I find the first two to be quite striking, love the unusual angle in the first and the sense of concentration in the second jumps out at me, interesting stuff.

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    Re: Yeshiva Shoot

    I love the second one.

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    Re: Yeshiva Shoot

    The subject matter is good, but they may be too tight/cramped. Maybe too little DOF also. I know you were shooting for flashless images - what ISO did you use? Seems like it may be a good decision to up the ISO at the expense of noise, so to get more DOF...

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    Re: Yeshiva Shoot

    Nice work on them all. I like the second one the most. Well done.
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    Re: Yeshiva Shoot

    I think 1,2,& 4 stand out as the keepers, for me - especially # 2. Number 5 does nothing for me, and # 3 seems to have some DoF issues as well as the boy's head being chopped off (might be better as a vertically cropped solo portrait of the boy in the glasses). Overall, very nice work - you should be pleased with the results.

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