Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: Yass

  1. #1
    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    11,750

    Yass

    or Yet Another Spiral Staircase - cliche I suppose, but ...
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Yass-pict7154.jpg  
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

  2. #2
    Fluorite Toothpaste poker's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2004
    Location
    Southern California
    Posts
    2,056

    Re: Yass

    The underside of the cement stairs seem so organic. So much of the details were captured nicely. Your exposure is awesome.

    I didn't even notice the stair climbers at the bottom. Fortunately they were blurred enough not to take away from the subject.

    I like it!
    Canon 5D MKII & Canon 7D

  3. #3
    Not-so-recent Nikon Convert livin4lax09's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    NH
    Posts
    2,776

    Re: Yass

    i like it alot, except the blown out lights detract from the shot. Other than that, great subject and good perspective.

  4. #4
    Member amithi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Mississippi
    Posts
    101

    Re: Yass

    I've never seen a spiral staircase like this one, I like it!
    Meg

  5. #5
    Grumpy Old Man Overbeyond's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Ireland (Now in London)
    Posts
    2,372

    Re: Yass

    What caught my immediate attention was the tewxture and feel to the underside of the stairs. Organic,as manacsa said, perfectly describes it. But the exposure is also fine in a situation of contrasts and difficult lighting.. The blur on the humans is just about perfect too.
    All in all a great shot that I think would look great in a large print.
    Tom
    http://www.overbeyond.com


    I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan

  6. #6
    is back jar_e's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Calgary, Alberta
    Posts
    3,264

    Re: Yass

    I like it. A few things distract me a little, but I think they balance each other out to make a strong picture. The texture and extended shutter is a great touch IMO.

    Wonderful job.

  7. #7
    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    11,750

    Re: Yass

    Quote Originally Posted by manacsa
    I didn't even notice the stair climbers at the bottom. Fortunately they were blurred enough not to take away from the subject.
    Glad it worked, I took about a dozen photos, while my wife sat, bored, waiting to go home.
    I took a few just of the staircase, but I thought it was lacking something without people.
    But I didn't want the people to dominate, so I used long exposure to have ghostly hints of people.
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

  8. #8
    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    11,750

    Re: Yass

    Quote Originally Posted by livin4lax09
    except the blown out lights detract from the shot.
    Without them, I thought it was too tightly cropped to the spiral.
    Maybe more dark to the left would balance the lights?
    That's one reason I didn't try to make the staircase axis vertivcal, to get more dark in the top left to balance the light bottom right.

    It didn't have the same impact in daytime, I went back and tried.
    .
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Yass-pict7125.jpg   Yass-pict7126.jpg  
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

  9. #9
    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    11,750

    Re: Yass

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    But the exposure is also fine in a situation of contrasts and difficult lighting.. The blur on the humans is just about perfect too.
    Thanks, I had to work at it, usng the histogram to check the exposure.
    Not for the lights, but watching the mid-tones for the rest of the image
    .
    These are two of the rejects from that night.
    .
    Attached Images Attached Images   
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

  10. #10
    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    11,750

    Re: Yass

    I tried to balance the lights of the car park, with the dark outside.
    I also wanted the people in it to give some movement in an otherwise rather sterile image.
    With the perspective giving strong right to left lines from the garage, I tried to cmopensate for that by putting the axis of the stairs off vertical too. With no ground references I was able to do that without giving away what I'd done.
    Ideally I'd like more room on the left, perhaps since it's black I can just enlarge the canvas with a black background colour and see how it looks.

    I backed up a bit further, but then the condom machine got in the way, and it brought in a street light on the right. Maybe with a bit og crop and editing this one is usable, too?
    Attached Images Attached Images  
    PAul

    Scroll down to the Sports Forum and post your sports pictures !

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •