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This works as a B&W. I like the angle, but it seems blurry towards the far end, which is a little distracting. I also love there are only a few clouds...it adds the right interest without being overpowering.
I think the boats lose definition here. They all melt in to each other and then melt in the background. Seems the BG and all the boats are concentrated in the exact same area, that makes the photograph lose a strong focal point to draw me in.
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
That's what I was going for how the boats on this lake just blend in there's so many of them it's a very busy lake, also I'm a composition freak have to have it!