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Thread: The Yacht Club

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    The Yacht Club

    Here's the Yacht Club from a different angle.
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    Re: The Yacht Club

    The black and white looks nice. The horizon is to centered. All in all I like it though.
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    Re: The Yacht Club

    Thanks Greg

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    Re: The Yacht Club

    This works as a B&W. I like the angle, but it seems blurry towards the far end, which is a little distracting. I also love there are only a few clouds...it adds the right interest without being overpowering.

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    Re: The Yacht Club

    I think the boats lose definition here. They all melt in to each other and then melt in the background. Seems the BG and all the boats are concentrated in the exact same area, that makes the photograph lose a strong focal point to draw me in.
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    Talking Re: The Yacht Club

    That's what I was going for how the boats on this lake just blend in there's so many of them it's a very busy lake, also I'm a composition freak have to have it!

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