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    Wounded Warrior....

    Not all of the wounds that Soldiers receive while in a combat zone are from direct enemy contact, some are received from indirect contact.
    This is a fellow Soldier and friend that lost his eye to cancer after serving in Afghanistan.
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    Technically, I think the shadow is not complimentary but as an image it is very powerful.
    Bless the soldier and tell him thankyou for me!
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    I like this a lot, Brian. It's a moving photo. You didn't have to tell us that he lost his eye to cancer. That changes the meaning. But it also speaks to your integrity. Regardless of the real story, the symbolism here tells about the cost of war and conflict. So in the end, it doesn't matter how he lost his eye. When you put a uniform and a wound together, there's a universal message that can't be ignored.

    The shadow that Frog doesn't like doesn't bother me. In fact, it makes his hand and the glass eye pop out from the background. I guess that in a normal portrait it's probably something to avoid. But the rules are different for Holga photos and I think it's actually a critical element in this photo, because it makes the glass eye stand out.

    Thanks for sending me a link for this. I'm glad you shared it here.
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    This is pure power. Like Photojohn said the symbolism is what really makes this picture. You need to be proud of what this image stands for, there are many famous photographers that take photographs of wounded warriors just as you did here, this is by far one of the most powerful images of that type that I have personally seen.

    The shadow also doesn't bother me, I think that it gives the eye something to contrast against.
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    Quote Originally Posted by Photo-John
    But it also speaks to your integrity.
    Thanks for sending me a link for this. I'm glad you shared it here.
    Thanks for saying that John, that means a lot to me coming from you, I think integrity is an important part of photography as well as a great way to be.
    Thanks for your interest in this particular photograph and thanks for your friendship too!
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    A compelling portrait, thanks for sharing, no critique. S
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    The black border around the image takes away the focal point. Also this photo was not in focus which also takes away from it. I would love to see this retaken with the macro on.

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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    he shoots with toy cameras, so it's the look. it's an acquired taste, but he does a fantastic job with it

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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    Quote Originally Posted by Former Best Buy Employee
    The black border around the image takes away the focal point. Also this photo was not in focus which also takes away from it. I would love to see this retaken with the macro on.
    What caleb said...
    I am not sure what you mean by your "macro on" comment.
    Thanks caleb!
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    Re: Wounded Warrior....

    Great Photo Brian! As an ex defence force member, I can really relate to this photo. It has a lot of emotion.

    Well done!
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